little miss military brat

Well, this is certainly different. You put in some good detail. I'm definitely going to read the rest of it, to see what happens. I really like how you set ...

i think its a great start to what will be a wonderful story. a little more detail would have been nice, but that's just me. it didn't feel as dark ...

Much respect to you. I could never write like that. It sounds like something right out of a classic. I loved it. I understood it, and your writing style seems ...

I liked it. Although, I have to agree, the "darling" was out of character for Edward. He seems too "upperclass" (for lack of better word) for that. Although the "I ...